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petalkit otterkit and heatherkit

Posted by Splashstar on March 7, 2010 at 9:05 AM

“Hurry up” squeaked otterkit


“Come on how do you expect us to run as fast as you we are younger than you” squeaked heatherkit


“Um, do you guys know how to climb trees” otterkit asked


“No, do you even know how” squeaked petalkit


“No, but that looks too fun to resist” squeaked otterkit as all of the young kits looked up and saw a large tree with vines and branches that looked like they could could hold their weight.


“Do you think we can try to climb it” squeaked heatherkit


“I think we can do it besides with all of us around anything is possible” squeaked petalkit so they all jumped up and missed the tree by a mouse length


“Man, so close but so far” squeaked heatherkit


“What does that mean?”Squeaked petalkit


“She doesn’t know she is just being a show off” squeaked otterkit


“Whatever let’s just try again” heatherkit said annoyed


“Ok in 1 2 3 jump” so they all jumped again


“Again none of us made it” squeaked petalkit being very depressed


“Wrong look” the squeaked came from upward and when the kits looked up they saw otterkit hanging on a branch. “Heatherkit grab my leg and climb up then petalkit you go and heatherkit help her I can get up by myself when you guys are up” so the kits scrambled up the tree and sat there for a little. “This is getting boring come on lets go over there” said otterkit as she pointed with her nose to a branch that stretched over to the other side of a river that was next to it.


“Ok sounds great” squeaked petalkit so they walked over to the branch.


“Whoa!!” squeaked heatherkit “the branch is moving”


“AHHH!!!!” screamed otterkit as the branch broke and landed on the other side of the river. “Ha ha that’s fun, let’s do it again” so they all laughed out loud and had loads of fun.


“Who is on Waterclan territory?!” a fierce voice came from behind some bushes that were in front of them


“Oh no” they squeaked as 4 cats steeped out or the bush. They recognized only aquafur milkclaw and seapaw

“Who are you” said a dark brown tom


“Um well I am otterkit and that is heatherkit and she is petalkit”


“There just kits run along but if we see you ever again we are going to have to fight you ok”


“Ok” otterkit squeaked then the patrol left and went back through the bushes


“How will we get back over to the other side” squeaked petalkit right after the patrol left


“Man we forgot to ask” squeaked heatherkit


“Oh no now we are stuck here” squeaked petalkit


“No we aren’t we can use this” squeaked otterkit pushing a large tree branch that could easily hold their weight and was already half way across the river


“It’s perfect” squeaked heatherkit

“YAY we are not stuck anymore” squeaked petalkit


“Ok you guys push it with me in 1 2 3 PUSH” so they all pushed as much as they could until the branch was touching both sides “come on let’s get home” so the kits walked across the branch and skipped happily all the way back to the camp.


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Reply Splashstar
4:00 PM on July 24, 2010 
Reply Ambertail
8:09 AM on July 24, 2010 
I like it
Reply Splashstar
12:14 PM on June 12, 2010 
thank you everyone. im actially writing a book so if you want more i can give you the first chapter
Reply Ivytears
3:19 PM on June 6, 2010 
U on Rainstar???
Reply Dancingkit
8:05 PM on May 18, 2010 
this story is nice
Reply Splashstar
3:46 PM on March 12, 2010 
i was board and i thought it whould be fun
Reply Heatherpaw
3:43 PM on March 10, 2010 
Cool story what made you write it?!